This set is unified by strong sonic patterning and by the way several poems turn everyday subject matter into performance. Snoring becomes something scored, fled, warned against, discovered after triumph, or resisted as part of a vow. Craft-wise, the group shows good control of echo and repetition: score/store/shore/spore/swore/snore and related sound families do real structural work rather than serving as filler. Many of the poems also succeed by holding back the final comic release for the third line, so the set feels tightly built and rhythmically aware.